Let Me Lie (re-written)

[jons]

I don't know if this should go here, but I have just re-written some of the lyrics to 'Let Me Lie'. Its not as good as Hayley's version but it good practice for me as Hayley has inspired me back into song-writing.


Let me lie on grasses green
On my mother earth I lean

Let me lie on grasses green
On my mother earth I lean
Under burning sun
Through my veins she runs

Let me share my tears with you
Feel them pierce your fertile soul
Hear my beating heart

Heal me through as I lie
here with you
heal me through
Let me sleep and keep me close

Let me run through forests light
Shadows touch the air I breathe
Through wilderness I ride

Heal me through as I run
Through your heart
Heal me through
Let me pass your way

Never fade away
Whatever time may say
She’ll always be my friend

Let me lie on grasses green
On my mother earth I lean
Far from distant stars
Their light may touch my eyes
But here is were I lie
In truth we never die

[mariannek]

Hi Jon,
That is sooo beautiful !!!
Keep up your gift of writing !!!
Take care, love, Marianne

[jons]

Thanks Marianne!